Friday, March 9, 2007

Visual Onomatopoeia Nmed 2005

Voila, my two attempts.

This was my second attempt at the assignment. I was much more pleased with it than the first attempt. I felt like it looks better without the feet on top but I added them anyways because I thought maybe it was too empty otherwise although maybe the white space is a good thing?? Let me know if anyone happens to read this.

I don't really like this one. It's not very legible but it definitely looks crammed which is what I was going for although a crammed design is not a very aesthetically pleasing one so it is no wonder why I dont like it.

1 comment:

MJ said...

You've definitely improved your first attempt!